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StoryBrand test: can visitors get your website in five seconds?
Your customer is not looking for a company. They are looking for a fix to their problem, fast. If your home page talks about you first, they tune out. This test shows where your message loses them.
The hero of your website is your customer
You leave with
- A score out of 10 for your message
- The lines to rewrite first
- Three headline ideas for your home page
The StoryBrand method, created by Donald Miller, starts from a simple idea: the customer is the hero of the story, you are the guide. You understand their problem, you give them a plan, you invite them to act.
At Monsieur Click, every page is written that way, then enriched with the words Google and AI expect: your service, your town, the problem solved. This test gives you the same lens on your current website.
Three minutes, no more
- 1
Open your home page on mobile
Look for five seconds without scrolling, then answer the first three questions.
- 2
Go through the seven steps
Hero, problem, guide, plan, action, stakes, success. Yes or no, no cheating.
- 3
Paste your copy
The tool counts who sits at the center: the customer (you) or the business (we).
Your questions, straight answers
Where does the StoryBrand method come from?
From Donald Miller’s book “Building a StoryBrand”. It applies the structure of great stories to a business message: a hero, a problem, a guide, a plan.
Is a StoryBrand message good for SEO?
Yes, when it uses your customers’ words. We combine the StoryBrand structure with local vocabulary and the entities Google expects on a service page.
Does the test work for my service pages?
Yes. Any page that gets visitors from Google should say at the top which service, for whom, and how to take action.
My score is low, do I rebuild the whole site?
Rarely. The top of the home page and your main service pages are often enough to change things.
A clear message is built, not found.
We rewrite your pages with the StoryBrand method and optimize them for Google and AI assistants at the same time.